FINAL DRAFT

After allowing the audience to analyse the previous draft and we analysed the feedback received that helped us enhance our last draft and make it as appealing and informative as our audience recommended it to be. We changed the location of the star rating (1) at the top right corner in order to make it more visible and we also changed the colour for the same reason. We came back to the “IN CINEMAS” (2) sign, as it will be more easy for the reader to differentiate the review based on the criteria if they’re interested in what’s available at the moment / in the future.  We also added the title of the movie (3) which is centred and visible to the reader. Also the quote (4) from the review is now more formal, as we’ve changed the background and position, so it is easy-to-read and not disturbing the overall layout. Also we decided to adopt a four-column layout, in order to fit in as much information for the reader, and also to be able to re-position the statistics, so it will look like it’s a part of the review, and not intruding it, as we had a lot of opinions based on the position of this and the layout of the review. As a last element of change, the name of the magazine was moved to the bottom (5) next to the issue date, and it’s not disturbing the reader, as we had some negative opinions about the position of those.